2017湖南自考學(xué)位英語(yǔ)作文思路點(diǎn)撥及范文（2）

 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Commercialization of Campus Music. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1）近年來(lái)校園音樂(lè)逐漸走向商業(yè)化，由企業(yè)發(fā)起主辦的大學(xué)生音樂(lè)節(jié)、校園歌手大賽層出不窮

2）導(dǎo)致這種現(xiàn)象的原因是什么

3）這種現(xiàn)象可能帶來(lái)的影響

【思路點(diǎn)撥】

本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析導(dǎo)致這種現(xiàn)象的原因，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求說(shuō)明該現(xiàn)象可能帶來(lái)的影響，由此可推知本文應(yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。

根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：描述近年來(lái)企業(yè)熱衷于舉辦大學(xué)生音樂(lè)節(jié)、校園歌手大賽的現(xiàn)象；分析導(dǎo)致這種現(xiàn)象的原因；說(shuō)明該現(xiàn)象可能帶來(lái)的影響。

【參考范文】

Commercialization of Campus Music

In recent years, campus music has been commercialized gradually. More and more enterprises are interested in being the sponsors of college music festivals or award competitions of campus singers. Campus singers and songs are not confined to college campus any more but being pushed to the market gradually.

The following factors can account for this phenomenon. On the one hand, some enterprises' paying more attention to campus music is out of their sense of commitment to the society. They want to set healthy enterprise images before the public. On the other hand, nowadays entertainment marketing is very popular. Enterprises want to utilize entertainment activities to improve their notability and influence. College students, as the focus of the whole society, are a good choice for these enterprises. Of course, these musical activities have brought more chances for campus singers to show their talents to the public. Besides, campus songs have gotten more wide spreading. However, commercialization of campus music to some extent reduces its uniqueness. Induced by fame and wealth, some campus singers try to cater to the tastes of the public and lost their own styles gradually.

Therefore, in order to make campus music develop more healthily, both the sponsors of music activities and our campus singers should pay more attention on music itself but not profits